Poetic Photographer

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Monday, 12 August 2013

Night Driving



to nowhere
to see no one
just driving
I pass by
and glance up
to
remember
another time
when
there was
 someone to see
somewhere to be
before you left me.


Poets United


~photo by me~


10 comments:

Loredana Donovan said...

Cool photo and nice emotion in your poem. Welcome to Poets United :)

Brian Miller said...

evocative...the difference between when you had and now is cool as a shadow...

Anna Barham said...

Very striking in its simplicity.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

A poem with a message - simply put, simply writ. I think I'm in love.

Sumana Roy said...



a feeling in harmony with the photo................black and white....

Mary said...

Wow....do I hear you on this one. You have captured an experience I have had as well.

Brother Ollie said...

nice - what a cool piece - draws us right into your story

jossina said...

simple yet appealng

Lisa A. Williams said...

Ive had this experience as well, just driving, wishing I could see that person again. Beautiful!

Debbie Dawnslight said...

I know what you mean... i like the way you wrote it, short and effective, like the photo.