Cool photo and nice emotion in your poem. Welcome to Poets United :)
evocative...the difference between when you had and now is cool as a shadow...
Very striking in its simplicity.
A poem with a message - simply put, simply writ. I think I'm in love.
a feeling in harmony with the photo................black and white....
Wow....do I hear you on this one. You have captured an experience I have had as well.
nice - what a cool piece - draws us right into your story
simple yet appealng
Ive had this experience as well, just driving, wishing I could see that person again. Beautiful!
I know what you mean... i like the way you wrote it, short and effective, like the photo.
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