well thought out poem for the prompt...I especially liked these lines... that makes me fearyou were never real
Creepy - your own ghost??
so close to meeting your ghost...the fear you were never real...like that much. kinda scaryin its reality. smiles.
What a meeting tht would be..very evocative..
I'm glad you chose to write this in 31 words. There is a simplicity that then captures the imagination. Well done I am enamored with your work
I especially loved this since I have a dissociative disorder that makes me feel as though I am not real and am a ghost. Loved the way you captured this so perfectly. Magnificent & horrifying - but beautiful, still!
Sometimes one learns to wonder what is real and what isn't!! I enjoyed pondering this poem.
Very cool writing & pondering ... love the mask! :)
Meeting my own ghost gives me the shivers! Very creepy.
beautiful tight poem MM
You left me wanting more detail about that ghost! Way to stick to the word count.
This one gave me goosebumps!It could be anyone behind the mask, couldn't it?Could even be your own ghost!Fabulous...:)
this poem really makes one reflect...last few lines is haunting!stacy lynn marhttp://warningthestars.blogspot.com/
This is really good. Intriguing and thought-provoking.
nice mask! ;o)
Hauntingly beautiful. :-)
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