You
come to me
only
at night
for
that time
it
feels so real
this
glass apartment
high
in the sky
with
wrap around balcony
we
walk hand in hand
your
kiss
the
summer scent of you
I
most miss
as
we talk
daylight
breaks
your
fading
screaming
at me
to
close my eyes
to
wait for darkness
you’ll
be back
I
awake
alone
in the apartment.
~DeniseAngela~
in the apartment.
~DeniseAngela~
Midnight Poet
~photo via mls Prague~
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23 comments:
hearing 'midnight rambler' as the soundtrack... ~
Sometimes those dreams DO feel so real, don't they? And undoubtedly....while they live....they are!
Nice thoughts to give one company.
...lonely hearts always long for company... sentiments shared alone make hearts grow bitter.... smiles...
"your fading
screaming at me"
I love this reversal. The fading image calls out to the dreamer, not the other way around. Much more intense like that.
Wistful and beautiful poem! So sad when we awake though and can only hope there will be more of these dreams.
so sad to wake alone there in the apartment....the scent of them thick...scent is huge for me...i agree with jack, that the dream doesnt want it to end as well is strong...i like
Sounds like a vivid fantasy!
Sad to wake up alone ~ Some dreams are so real though ~
there is a tinge of sadness through out..the poem is something I can relate to... sometimes the night isn't long enough...
When dreams and sleep are preferable to reality it's sad.. and loneliness have gone to far
wistful longing makes it so beautiful and intense....beautiful lines..
longing...so beautifully expressed.
is that your actual apartment in this photo? wow if it is.
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PS: I like your comment below about taking photos with film. I was just thinking about that the other day. :<)
a beautiful dream with a scary edge.
Keep 'em coming MM.
I guess, nostalgia hits the hardest during the night. Beautifully penned. So vivid.
Oh, those times we've wished for the dreamstate to become the real. I loved this! Lyrical and tender.
There is both yearning and tenderness in your verses. Dreams can often be an escape, but can also be a trap. I sense some of both here.
Elizabeth
So sad when we wake up to find dreams are just that.
So sad when we lose somebody...
Anna :o]
So deep the melancholy of knowing that you will be alone after some moments of being in someone's company. Beautiful, I truly felt the words. :-)
Oh, he will definitely be back...who wouldn't...who could resist these words of a fantasy so real.
This is SO beautiful.:)
I feel so much more awake when I'm dreaming.
/Avy
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