upon my wake
makes me smile
drifting down
if only for awhile
on this town
if only for awhile
on this town
white like diamonds
tear
drops of rain
frozen
like my heart
like my heart
makes
a snowflake
sparkle
vanishing
on
my black dress
like
jets in the night.
16 comments:
I love your words... you make snow sound so magical. ♡ :-)
Mademoiselle Modelle,
Such a sweetly formed impression of snowflakes and the gentle movement as they connect with our being...
Eileen
great visual, them against the dress like the night sky...i like the hush of snow...its the closest thing to peace for a frozen heart, you know...smiles.
Enjoyed the vision of diamond snowflakes..even if they are only
on the town for a bit...
this poem reminded me that winter can be beautiful and sensual...even though I am buried in ice... :)
I too am buried in ice and sleet ~ But I like the snow flakes as shining diamonds ~ That gif is amazing ~
They are like that - brief flashes of brilliance. I love how you made them so personal...wonderful details tucked in every line.
Lovely visually sensuous poem. Sometimes i wish i could freeze a snowflake in time, so that it may shine on forever. Merry Christmas!
Ah! The soft touch of snowflakes!
lovely...twinkling like stars at night(black dress)...Merry Christmas
First of all, I really enjoyed the picture. And then really liked the way you described snowflakes falling on the black dress and then vanishing like jets n the night.
Hope you have a Happy Holiday!
Beautiful imagery dear, I loved your description of snow flakes vanishing like jets on black jacket. Have a snowy holiday!
Best wishes
Ankita
Vlacka
Czech for snowflake
My X gf's nickname
But I loved your poem anyway . . .
teardrops of rain
frozen like my heart
Hello, Vancouver, BC ... Red Deer, AB here ... smiles ... thank you for stopping at my blog ... smiles ... Love, cat.
Aww…I found that rather sad.
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