Mademoiselle Modelle: A Black Kiss

Sunday, 27 October 2013

A Black Kiss

If we are one

then I am the dark

& you are the light

so blind to

your kisses

in the night

but I see the marks

that make others

hide on sight.

~DeniseAngela~

Midnight Poetry

Poets United

14 comments:

Vandana Sharma said...: Different shades of kiss:); 27 October 2013 at 10:42
Mary said...: Ah, sometimes there is more to a kiss than meets the eye! Your poem has me thinking.; 27 October 2013 at 10:53
Brian Miller said...: it takes two to tango...and black & white to see the whole picture....; 27 October 2013 at 11:03
ZQ said...: Yikes! Deep or shallow this piece really works.
Thanks
ZQ; 27 October 2013 at 13:28
Truedessa said...: blind to your kisses..sometimes
we don't want to see the light.,
interesting poem.; 27 October 2013 at 14:44
Sherry Blue Sky said...: A cool write. Makes me wonder why others "hide on sight".; 27 October 2013 at 16:20
Lisa A. Williams said...: Thought provoking piece, love it.; 27 October 2013 at 17:50
Lisa A. Williams said...: Thought provoking piece, love it.; 27 October 2013 at 17:50
Anonymous said...: mysterious pen, Mlle...; 27 October 2013 at 22:12
Sumana Roy said...: umm.......what marks i wonder.....i like the contrast...; 28 October 2013 at 09:27
Stormcat Poetry said...: Maybe the kiss of a vampire or a spirit. Or the kiss the melts through to the very deepest hidden fears and desires. No wonder most are afraid of it.; 28 October 2013 at 12:44
Geraldine said...: Oh, very nice! Like the vibe of this poem. The theme of your blog is soooo cool btw.

Happy Week, G

www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com; 29 October 2013 at 10:06
Tracy Crenshaw said...: I love the idea that though the other person is seen as the light, they have marks that make others turn away. Intriguing poem.; 30 October 2013 at 04:57
Ygraine said...: I really like the interplay of opposites here...black and white, dark and light etc.
Everything is in perfect balance...:); 2 November 2013 at 11:47

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